More to the point: Who should be telling the story?
I often see the comment from agents that they are looking for writers who have
a “unique voice”. Therefore, simply develop an original voice. Right? But what
exactly does that entail? First, decide
who is telling the story. The point of view of the main character or
characters has everything to do with voice. It’s not your personal voice but
that of the character in your story.
For instance, this is one of the most important
things in writing a successful young adult novel. It does not mean that you
must write only from a first person point of view. However, teenage readers
often respond well to a first person narrative. But voice has to do with choice
of vocabulary and style as well. My YA novels, STACY’S SONG, THE DEVIL AND
DANNA WEBSTER, and WITCH WISH are written in the first person from the main
character’s point of view. Stacy has a sharp sense of humor as does Val while
Danna is sensitive and artistic. These things influence how they tell their
stories. Tip: It often helps to read your writing out loud.
With traditional
romance, there are generally two viewpoints that move from female to male,
usually written in the third person. They need to be distinctive from each
other even in third person POV. I think it’s important for the hero or male
protagonist to be represented in viewpoint. In HIGHLAND HEART, now in
pre-release from Luminosity, the POV is weighted toward the heroine who is the
key character, but the hero’s viewpoint is presented about forty percent of the
time. In SINFUL SEDUCTION the viewpoints are equally weighted.
Mystery varies more. Often these days, the first
person viewpoint is the unreliable narrator who may not be telling the truth
for a variety of reasons. It sets the reader up for the surprise or twist
ending. Most common is the third person narration. This has the advantage of
varying point of view with ease. But multiple viewpoints have one important
disadvantage: they may cause the story to lose focus if mishandled. I prefer to
write my mystery stories and novels from the third person viewpoint. In BLOOD
FAMILY, my latest Kim Reynolds mystery, most of the novel is seen from Kim’s
viewpoint since she is the central character/sleuth.
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With
short stories, it’s best to set the point of view with just the main character.
Have a clear focus as Poe recommended. Decide in advance who that key character
will be and then present from that viewpoint.
Sometimes
authors have multiple first person POV while others will use multiple third
person. But changing viewpoints too often can confuse readers causing them to
reject the work. Readers need to respond with a sense of connection to at least
one character. So that character must seem real and matter to the reader on
some level. When the POV of a key character resonates with the reader what
happens to that character is something the reader wants and needs to know.
In the 19th
century, omniscient narration was popular. The all-knowing third person
narrator informed the reader. Occasionally, writers will still use second
person narration as well, addressing the reader directly using “you” and
“your”. We don’t see
much of either one of these in modern fiction writing. However, an article in
THE THE WRITER newsletter observes a “reason writers
might strive for second-person point of view: They’re looking for immediacy.
One example that springs readily to mind is, of course, the “Choose Your Own
Adventure” series of YA/middle-grade books.”
Cross
genre novels can be tricky. My novel DEATH PROMISE is a romantic suspense
mystery thriller. The novel is mainly presented from the POV of the two main
characters who balance each other. Did I manage it effectively? If you read the
novel, let me know what you think. I’d love input and feedback.
As
observed, in regard to short story fiction, editors tend to prefer one POV.
Multiple viewpoints don’t work well because of limited length. The short story
works best with a single focus.
With
multiple POV the readers see and hear things from the unique perspective of the
various characters in a story or novel. That is why you always have to consider
the different style and vocabulary each narrator presents if you want to create
the semblance of reality, verisimilitude, in your work.
Your
thoughts and comments, as always, welcome here.
